Educational games 4

Educational games have moved from a reward in education to an accepted technique for teaching and learning at all levels (Pre-K higher education). Argue whether or not educational games have value in 21st century education and what the value may be. Explain and support your view based on scholarly sources published within the last five years.
Write an objective academic paper in third-person perspective
Written a paper that is approximately seven to ten pages total in length including
a title page
five to seven pages of body text (1500 to 2000 words)
a references page
Formatted your paper according to APA style
Your Final Research Paper will be assessed on the following components:
Structure
Development
Style
Grammar
APA formatting
Resources
The Final Research Paper
Must have a body length of five to seven double-spaced pages formatted according to APA style
Must include a separate title page with the following:
Title of paper
Students name
Course name and number
Instructors name
Date submitted
Must begin with an introductory paragraph that has a succinct thesis statement.
Must address the topic of the paper with critical thought well-supported claims and properly cited evidence.
Must end with a conclusion that reaffirms your thesis.
Must use and cite at least five scholarly sources
Must document all sources in APA style
Must include a separate references page that is formatted according to APA style
Highlighted is the feed back from my instructor
Your thesis statement is a bit too broad. You are on the right track but you could write a book on the topichow can you focus it more? Make sure that you dont have so much information to cover that you only touch on points superficially instead of indepth.
Your annotations needed more detail in order for this to be a strong research document. This isnt just about meeting a word count requirement but truly analyzing the usability of a source.
I have attached a templet to follow.