For Don Timoh – Final Project

Final Essay Project
25% of Final Grade
This will be a project in a revision to show how you have progressed as a writer and critical thinker throughout the semester. Your goal is to reexamine two of the essays youve worked on and revise them based on instructor feedback and your current understanding of the topic or writing concepts.In addition to revision you will be expanding on the content and research components in order to help enhance the quality of the essay. You will be graded on the improvements and progress you have made from the original draft.
Revision Requirements:
Choose two essays from the semester
Revise the essays to 1500-1600 words each
Increase the number of academic sources to seven per essay
Review Instructor feedback and apply it your new draft
Make effective changes within your essay to improve your writing style and research content
MLA formatting
Word Doc. or PDF
Consider the Following:
If your research sources are not academic or ineffective change them
If your thesis statement is weak or indecisive develop it more
If your organization is hard to follow develop a new framework
If you lacked MLA formatting use it
I’ll send it to you feedbacks for these essay and you have to take into consideration when you writing.
Essay #3- Sources:
https://www.theguardian.com/science/2013/may/12/how-to-spot-a-murderers-brain
http://www.npr.org/2014/03/21/292375166/criminologist-believes-violent-behavior-is-biological
https://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/wired-love/201611/nature-vs-nurture-in-brain-science

Episode 52: The Checklist (10.7.2016)

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Also I’ll submit some article in attachments If you need you can use them. These sources for Essay#3 as you have Essay#4 sources you can revise the essay easily.
The due time is 20-21 hours later at this time.