Peer review 12

600-word peer review for a literature review attached below
Follow these guidelines while writing the peer review.
The review has 3 parts . please write responsibily accourding to the instruction by due time.
Respond to each part using the following questions as your guide. Write the review as a letter to the group developing as many paragraphs as you feel you need. If you want to offer some parts of your letter in list form thats fine but if so weave those into your paragraphs where you use full sentences:
Part I: Context of the Topic/Problem (or Background to Xthe problem is named here)
Lit reviews typically begin with some history of how the problem has been framed and
investigated. Since this review will be read by an audience from at least two different
disciplines this section will need to appeal to readers across both fields. Does it do
that? Insider knowledge terminology and assumptions need to be minimal. Does the
history provided seem professional and learned in other words but still clear to those
who may not have special knowledge? Is there enough information? or too much?
Does it keep your attention get to essential questions and problems and show overall
how each discipline approaches this problem?
Part II: Discussion of Select Research
In this section the body of the lit review the writers need to discuss a limited number
of published research on the problem from the perspectives of two disciplines. How that organization is determined is up to the writers but the result should ideally read smoothly and clearly. The logic of the organization should become apparent and convincing. The organizational pattern might be chronology components of each disciplines perspective researchers of the problem or something else.
Is the organization pattern sensible and clear to you? Does it bring the problem to light
teach you how various experts have approached it and show developments in thinking
about the problem across time disciplines and perhaps cultures? Do you want more
in any one area or overall?
Does the lit review address key questions such as:
–how are disciplinary perspectives on the problem similar and/or different?
–how do the sources frame the problem? what key questions do the sources address?
–is there commonality in the problem framing within each discipline that reveals disciplinary thinking? Is there work done here comparing/contrasting this thinking
across the two disciplines?
–how does the language of the two disciplines vary?
Turn back to the lit review of Casanave from earlier in the course for models of how lit reviews introduce this or that article. For example Casanave uses phrases such as in an early piece by . . . the message was that . . . or however the findings have as yet had little impact on . . . or in a related but somewhat different approach . . . This
typical lit review language will grow naturally from what the writers need to say but
as a reviewer you can assist the writers by looking for these summary and introductory phrases.
Part III: Conclusion (or another name you prefer)
This section of the lit review synthesizes what has been covered and suggests possible
or likely directions for the research. The writers should NOT offer solutions to the problem (thats Project 3); rather the writers might point to areas of need in the research or directions for the research to investigate further. This section involves analysis of how each discipline approaches the problem and what these approaches say about each disciplines conventions for writing and thinking. Here the writers have freedom to interpret propose criticize and predict. The tone here must remain balanced reasonable fair and responsible but the writers may offer strong responses. Respond as a reviewer to these possible ways the writers are synthesizing the published literature. Are you seeing critical thinking? Are they holding to the standards of professional fair critique? Note what you find working well and perhaps less well. Suggest any ways to improve in terms of clarity thoroughness or conciseness.
Comment on this drafts readability so far: is the writer using sections and headings? Are you confused anywhere? What might make the texts design sharper more inviting and readable?