MASTER TUTOR2011

Give me a one-paragraph writing to against the argument below. Need to be logic and no gramma mistake.
The dropping of two atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki was an unnecessary means to end a war. While the Japanese had a strong will power and endurance to fight in one of the documentaries we watched mentioned that their forces had been severely depleting prior to the dropping of the bombs. Which means the end to the war was likely close to an end without needing introduction of nuclear warfare. As with bombings throughout much of the war the goal was to instill fear rather than to make dramatic dents into the military. While Hiroshima did have a large training sight for military civilians inhabited much of the city. Thus the US based on reconnaissance missions had the Intel that mostly civilians would be affected by dropping little boy on this city. Due to this attack many died from direct impact and even more from the lasting effects the bomb caused.
Due to the radiation poisoning that accompanied the many effects of the war people near the bombsite had faced many internal mutations that led to the development of various diseases such as leukemia. In the process of trying to better understand the illnesses caused researchers and doctors examined patients on a regular basis. While this was a helpful way of understanding the process often left many patients (who were typically children) losing there dignity. In one film a woman shares her experience during this process. She was forced to remove all of her clothes in front of a large group of men to be examined. In this way the bombings took away her dignity as a person.
Following the atomic bomb drops the United States government tried their best to keep American support. They tried doing this by shielding the public from the gruesome photos of the aftermath of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. In this way they were dehumanizing what had happened just an ocean away. They tailored the focus to supporting the end of the war rather than explaining how it truly happened and the loss they deemed necessary to do so.
The US had become so enthralled by the need to end the war that they were willing to risk the lives everyone on this earth to do so. In a previous documentary scientists working on the bomb had admitted that they knew so little of the effects of the bomb that there was a potential that it could have consumed the whole world. This goes to show how little regard they had for truly protecting its citizens but rather to instill a fear around the world and establish itself as a superpower. Not only did it threaten civilization then it now poses a threat in any conflict. With the introduction of nuclear bombs it has changed the way wars will be fought forever. Since bombs like this are existence and technology-advancing everyday there is a fear that nuclear war could break out at anytime.