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    Unit 5 Assignment: Argument Essay Introduction

    In this assignment, you will write the introduction to your Argument Essay. The    is due at the end of Unit 7. This week, you just have to create the first paragraph for that essay. You will be able to get feedback from your instructor and then revise the introduction when you submit the Unit 7 Argument Essay.

    · See    for the detailed instructions and grading criteria.

    FEEDBACK FROM PREVIOUS ASSIGNMENTS:

    You cover a lot of ground. While that's good in some ways, it can lead you to move a bit quickly. I'd like to see you filter some details out so that you can slow down and fully flesh out what you do leave in. Also, you could tighten some sentences. There's quite a bit of good potential here; now, make sure that you're fully executing up to that potential. Still, you're off to a good start.

    There's some interesting material here, but make sure that you're bringing in a direct quote and correctly formatting it. You take a clear position, and you consistently argue it. Now, be just a bit more careful with your presentation. 

    You make some interesting points. That said, I'd like to see you be a bit clearer with what, specifically, you're pulling from your sources. Also, there are a number of places where you might proofread a bit more carefully. There's good potential. Now, make sure that you're careful with your delivery. 

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