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Please i want to critiqu the article i will attached the first one i did. i did not critiqu the article made loose point please if your the one doing this paper for me critiqu the article by followinthese instructions. tThanks.
Bibliography entry:
Author Affiliations: NOT JUST NAMES. Tell where they are from; what is their profession/expertise? Usually located right under the names bottom of first page sometimes at end of article before the references.
Purpose Should be 1 3 sentences
Note: You are reporting on an article from a journal. A journal is like a book that is a collection of individual articles. That is why the journal title gets underlined in the bibliography entry. Therefore you could say The purpose of this article or The purpose of the study reported in this article is but NOT: The purpose of this journal is.
Write simply and concisely IN YOUR OWN WORDS. Be a reporter NOT a novelist.
Avoid saying that the results prove; psychologists prefer the results show demonstrate or indicate..it is hard to prove things in the social sciencesL
Dont say the fact is unless it REALLY IS a FACT! Reference the authors or the study rather than reporting the study findings as facts.
Using Acronyms:
Avoid using numerals at beginning of sentences:
Tricky words:
Be careful using they who are they? Apronoun refers to the preceding noun.
Plurals vs possessives:
WRONG: the researchers were trying to find
RIGHT: the researchers were trying to find
RIGHT: (one researcher) – the researchers hypothesis was
RIGHT: (>one researcher) the researchers hypothesis was…
Plural of hypothesis is hypotheses; plural of diagnosis is diagnoses
Critique: Writing a reaction is good but full credit requires evaluation and/or suggestions – a critical analysis.